Good.
Good, But theres always room for improvment:
Glitches:
If you scribble below the "Crumple" it will lift you up and if the flags above you, there ya go.
Go through Walls
fall off a edge and drop from top of screen.
go up strait walls
scribble locks "Wont let you stop scribbleing"
Things i would like to see:
LIMITED INK! "Sorry for caps" but i was thinking about that the whole time i was playing"
To make the pencil not repeat actions.
Things to keep:
The song "runaway" I LOVE that song.
consept "Thats a obvious one"
Ratings "1 through 10":
Graphics: 7
Consept: 9
Entertainment: 10 "Entertained me till the end"
Glitches: 5
Music: 10 "It had one of my favorite Ng songs on there, Runaway"
Sound: 6 "Was there any?"
Focus: 9
Fun: 8
TOTAL"1 through 10": 7
TOTAL "1 through 5": 4
I hope this helped you and i am looking forward to crumpled2